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WriterVerse Challenge #19: All Dialogue

All Talk | T | 100w | MCU | Natasha Romanoff/Sharon Carter | (Possibly works w/ Civil War canon but IDK) | also for femslash100 challenge #466: Dead.




“No, really. What was it like, when you were a kid? I mean, you never knew your parents, the first thing you did after nursing school was hitchhike to Colombia, and you came back a decorated SHIELD agent as a Pretty Young Thing. You grew up right underneath the thick of it. Like Fury told you today after the funeral, your aunt’s legacy lives on, in you. It always has. But who are you?”

“You always have been a fabulous interrogator, Romanoff.”

“Not interrogating you, Carter. Just...trying to see beneath the badge.”

“Well, Romanoff, when you say it like that...”

Comments

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swan_secrets
Jul. 12th, 2015 09:47 am (UTC)
My only criticism is that there isn't more!
clarahow
Jul. 12th, 2015 07:21 pm (UTC)
What a lovely criticism to have!!!! I'm glad you like it!!! <3
xjadedgrlx
Jul. 13th, 2015 12:55 am (UTC)
I’m with swan_secrets, I would have liked to read more! I like the way you managed to capture Natasha’s flirtatious side; far too many writers fail to capture her sense of humor. I also like how you incorporate some of Sharon’s backstory into the plot; I feel like I needed that in order to connect with her a bit (since we didn’t learn a whole lot about her in CA:TWS).
clarahow
Jul. 14th, 2015 03:50 am (UTC)
Hehe well, lucky for you both, this is actually part of a larger thing! And wow. this comment, I, wow. I worried about not being able to convey a similar feeling as I do with description in a dialogue-only piece but to hear this I just *blushes*
salmon_pink
Jul. 27th, 2015 02:47 pm (UTC)
ooooh, love this! Natasha simultaneously buttering Sharon up and trying to get in her head, Sharon seeing right through it, everything easing into that delicious flirting so effortlessly - it's perfect! ♥
clarahow
Aug. 8th, 2015 07:06 am (UTC)
very glad you enjoy it :D (sorry I missed your comment until now, oops)
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